okay a few things
- i'm looking down at my notebook, because it would be wayy too much effort to memorize 4 stanzas that i wrote myself :P
- i realize that i pushed my glasses up like a fool (and yes, my pants are on the ground. the rest of me too!)
- im sorry this is a cappella, i can't decide on a piano part
- yes, I WOULD LOVE INPUT AND ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS! I NEED THEM! THIS SONG IS NAKED!
- yes, that is a pile of recently discarded clothes on my bed ;)
- i'm sorry i get all weird with my voice and slide out of key on "eyes"
- yes, there are only 3 notes in this song. i'm very new to this
- i did write more variation in the verses, i just didnt sing it 'cause im such a lame-o
but really y'all leave suggestions pleasssse. and if you do I'LL LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING IN THIS DAMN WORLDDDDDDDDD!
i'm stalking your blog again, hollaaa :D
ReplyDeletei think it's lovelyy. your voice goes really well with jazzy songs, if you want to keep going with that feel you could sing some of the verses syncopated or play awesome cheesy arpeggios on the piano during the rests
ooh and a chorus would really complete it :D